Best for
Anyone building a page for an offer, campaign, event, or lead magnet.
Use this when
Before you touch a page builder. Copy first, design second.
The resource
Section-by-section framework
1. HEADLINE [The outcome, for a specific person, in under 12 words.] Formula: [Outcome] for [Target Customer] — [qualifier that adds credibility] 2. SUBHEADLINE [One sentence expanding on how, or removing the biggest doubt.] 3. PRIMARY CTA (above the fold) Button: [Call to Action] Reassurance line under the button: [what happens next, e.g. "No card needed. Takes 2 minutes."] 4. THE PROBLEM [2–3 short paragraphs describing their situation more clearly than they could themselves.] - [Symptom] - [Symptom] - [Symptom] 5. THE SOLUTION [What [Offer] is, in plain language. One short paragraph.] 6. HOW IT WORKS Step 1: [what happens] Step 2: [what happens] Step 3: [what happens] 7. WHAT'S INCLUDED - [Deliverable] — [what it does for them] - [Deliverable] — [what it does for them] - [Deliverable] — [what it does for them] 8. PROOF [Real testimonials with permission, verifiable facts, credentials, or work samples. Nothing invented.] 9. PRICE AND TERMS [Price] — [what's included, payment terms, what happens after purchase] 10. OBJECTION HANDLING (FAQ) "[Objection as a question]" — [honest answer] "[Objection as a question]" — [honest answer] "[Objection as a question]" — [honest answer] "[Objection as a question]" — [honest answer] 11. WHO THIS ISN'T FOR [Honest exclusion. Increases conversion by increasing trust.] 12. FINAL CTA [Restate the outcome in one line.] Button: [Call to Action] [Contact option for people who want to ask first.]
Writing rules
- Write the headline last, after you've written the problem section. - Use "you" far more often than "we". - Cut every sentence that could apply to any business. - Read it on a phone. Most people will. - Every claim needs to be something you could defend if challenged.
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Landing pages that collect personal information generally need a privacy notice and, in some regions, explicit consent. Make sure any claim, price, or guarantee on the page is accurate and substantiated.
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